The Wasteland Of Cold Fire ( A New Look Inside )~Pod 12/7/10 by VP
To look inside the deepness of A universe suspended by Infinite Time In the whispers that echo of our short lives And to see the Sweat , Blood and Tears Of the fallen on burning distant sands I am but...
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This is working for me Robert, the language moves and resonates, sets a mood. V
View ArticleRe: The Wasteland Of Cold Fire ( A New Look Inside )~Pod 12/7/10 by VP
Reminiscent of prophetic utterances and equally hard to interpret Robert. I enjoyed the read without being sure I understood the message.
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Created2Write writes,This is working for me Robert, the language moves and resonates, sets a mood. VThis is the second part of a more personal set of writes i am working with...glad you enjoyed it!!!...
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This gives the feeling of looking within oneself, giving words to buried feelings. Excellent! I think it even moved my muse because I feel her stirring around, worrying around ideas as I type!
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obsidiansunshine writes,This gives the feeling of looking within oneself, giving words to buried feelings. Excellent! I think it even moved my muse because I feel her stirring around, worrying around...
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DarkwingGoth2005 wrote:To look inside the deepness of A universe suspended by Infinite Time In the whispers that echo of our short lives And to see the Sweat , Blood and Tears Of the fallen on burning...
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Really like this, especially the following lines: To look inside the deepness of A universe suspended by Infinite Time ...No longer am I In the wasteland of cold fire Chills run rampant.
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